Sunday, 28 November 2010

Treatment Presentation Feedback

The feedback we received was that the idea of our opening sequence of starting at the end and showing the build up to that is a good opening sequence that will hook the audience. We were also told that we researched the genre of musical drama well as we knew everything we were asked about it.

To improve it, we were told that we should make all the characters be seen separately and show their backgrounds. This will make the opening sequence stronger. We were told the characters should all have their own problems and stab each other in the back to get to where they want to be as dancers.

To further our opening sequence and main task, we will do some more genre research to get a better understanding of the dance film industry. We will also start to plan our opening sequence out (the camera, the locations of where to film, the order of events) and start to plan the voice over’s and effects we will use in the opening sequence.

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