Nice work, DPR. A couple of points to bear in mind. First - the match-on-action doesn't quite work. Have another look at the door opening and closing - it all happens too quickly, I think. Secondly, there's a jump cut at 00:46 - can you see it? How could you have avoided it?
Nice work, DPR. A couple of points to bear in mind. First - the match-on-action doesn't quite work. Have another look at the door opening and closing - it all happens too quickly, I think. Secondly, there's a jump cut at 00:46 - can you see it? How could you have avoided it?
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